I like most of this. I would not know where to look for card without reading here. Maybe clues? Sparkle or other effect of where may be good place to click? Also movement between areas is bit confusing. Like the girls. Will be better with more scenes. A good start!

Not bad at all. I like curvy girls so it's good for me.
However, as mentioned by the others, the english translation is very approximatif even for a non english speaker like me...
I will keep an eye on your work

Definitely interested in seeing the progress of this one.

-It obviously needs a better translation

-In addition to correcting the translations, the dialogue needs some tweaking. For example, the teacher says to go sit down even when she's outside of the classroom

-There needs to be a faster way to get to the phone

-Adding an option to skip animated scenes would be nice


Keep it up!