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Okay, hear me out....


:idea: Invisibility....

A hand full of girls in town, and you're class mates with them (maybe another NERD storyline besides the Tentacle monster?) you create a serum that allows you to turn invisible for a certain period of time.

You only have enough time to do certain things (ie: steal their clothing, peep on them, spook them out, etc) Whether it be at their homes, gym locker room, or showers, etc. But you cant get caught in steam too much, because your silhouette will be visible, or you cant keep spooking them or touching them when there's more than one girl around or they'll find you out. Also, there'll be obsticles in your way too, like you have to avoid standing right in front of them when they're walking or they'll hit you, and/or you'll have to watch out accidentally walking into things (like in a kitchen, if you hit the counter too hard avoiding her, flour will fall on you or something to make you visible) BUT, if there is only one girl around, you can either take advantage of her (trap her) or you can convince her some crazy story (if she believes in the paranormal).

All this to add more of a challenging game feel. And because of the objectives being so light and timed (taking clothing, stalking, watching, effecting them with your actions) the re-playability will be really great.

:geek: ?

EDIT: Forgot to mention: I know it's a cliche story element, but you have to admit, the way the game is set up now a setting like this would use the current mechanic very well.


Mon Aug 19, 2013 5:39 pm
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Great idea,

Simple but elegant. I always loved the idea of being invisible and sneak inside a girl's bedroom.
Making it into a game sure is an very interesting idea.

(Y) :)


Mon Aug 19, 2013 5:57 pm
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Thank you for the quick reply (wasn't really expecting it :D )

I was also going to mention that you could (potentially) find out each girls hidden secrets/fetishes (like the first story with the boss's SM thing).

1) You could use it to either black mail them when you're not invisible

ex:
The main character walks up to her while she's conversing with friends, and tries to say hello.

She looks at him with distaste, and says "go away loser.."

He replies "Neighbors' dog..."

She suddenly stops talking with her friends with a shocked look, her friends are somewhat confused and look at her, "What's he talking about?"

She says, "N...Nothing..." And walks away dragging the main character with her to another place (alone), and says "How do you know I accidentally let my neighbor's dog out!?"

"It doesn't matter how I know, all that matter is it will be a very bad deal if anyone else knows..."

She sighs heavily, looking into the characters eyes with fear and anger. Nearly trembling, and pale she hesitantly speaks "W...What do I have to do... to k-keep this between us..?"

(I know, lame example, I cant think of anything else right now. :oops: )

Or 2)

When you figure out their darkest fetishes/ dreams (like I mentioned earlier, like that one girl with the SM in the first story) then when you start to 'trap' or 'take advantage' of them when you're invisible, doing the right stimuli of what they like they'll be less likely to call out for help and run but more likely to go with it (ex: oral, breast massage, foot massage, or role play, etc). You'll figure out the type of thing they're into the most by listening in to their personal conversations, or watching what they do on their down time.

EDIT: Reduced redundancy.


Mon Aug 19, 2013 8:23 pm
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Sounds pretty awesome!

Hope the Mod goal is met so you can make it!


Sun Oct 13, 2013 4:44 pm
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