I see you've added some in-game images, a good start but the you have posted images don't feel tailor made for offbeatr. I'd suggest you start up the latest build of the game and try to capture some shots you would want to show to a potential investor.
This sidebar I feel is not the best choice to be honest. I suggest you replace it. I think it a much better use for this limited space would be a shot of Tiffany laying on the desk, blouse open, skirt up and with a few splashes of cum on her tits. Maybe using the new mucus engine.
Still images don't do much to show off how game play works, so I suggest you make new videos for offbeatr as well.